tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37195421.post769080558520818855..comments2023-10-05T17:40:43.927+01:00Comments on The Selkie's Tales: Feb ’87 – O’ Grade English CompositionAllyBallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08683352058326706456noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37195421.post-17849729493739282922007-12-29T20:57:00.000+00:002007-12-29T20:57:00.000+00:00Teacher’s comments:“Good opening. Very descriptiv...Teacher’s comments:<BR/><BR/>“Good opening. Very descriptive”<BR/>“Why was the nurse “stupid”?”<BR/>“The doctors themselves were unfortunate?”<BR/>“Good story. Vivid descriptions and crisp, lively dialogue. At times I thought it was a little too cynical – the bit about Mary and the nurse thinking each other were stupid”<BR/><BR/>Marks:<BR/><BR/>20 – 22 out of 25AllyBallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08683352058326706456noreply@blogger.com